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Venus In a Bikini

Some oils on canvas by Sandro Botticelli will never capture what I now see. There is a young woman with great beauty. This heavenly vision is stimulating me. As Jackson Browne sings: “She must be somebody’s baby”, the music and lyrics describe her completely. Frolicking in the sand along the sea, it looks as if I see Venus in a bikini. Running with the rhythm of the waves’ crashing sound, she has the attention of other men around. On this beach, no greater beauty can be found. Did this doll rise from the ocean on a seashell? On each man, she has cast a magic spell. This pretty young thing is something special. Today on the sand and surf, she’s a spectacle. All the other guys want to make time and have fun. Who would not want her? Who will be the lucky one?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/27/2013 5:53:00 AM
Robert this is a delightful poem congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:59:00 PM
hello, Robert, the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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Date: 7/25/2013 3:08:00 AM
Were you the lucky one Robert?...Great summer fun poem...'Somebody's Baby' is one of my favorite songs... Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 7/25/2013 1:03:00 AM
I see you have been peeking lol congratulations Robert xx
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:34:00 PM
Robert, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:56:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive..Wish you luck on meeting this beauty..Sara
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:02:00 PM
gosh, it sounds like you were somewhere by a beach today, Robert. CUTE poem. You describe this enchantress well. And I am happy you now know monoku!!
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/15/2012 8:10:00 PM
Where I am, we have beaches, but it is way too cold to be on them today. Listening to the late Bobby Darin crooning "Beyond the Sea" inspired me to write this entry.

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