Venus Fly Trap

Carnivorous blooms
hothouse fed,
thick tonged in lolling herds.

Feeding time is all day.
The flies are introduced
in humming shifts.

By evening 
the electric buzz is dimmed,
the curvaceous florals ingest;
sticky throats absorb.

One dilatory black fly
drones on alone.

Meaty flowers listen -

wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ermine Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 12:51 AM
Oh wow! These man eating temptresses, I guage an alignment! Super kooky, morbid melancholy. (is first stanza herd supposed to be head)? Great either!
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Fun poem ~ Feeding time at the zoo / I mean greenhouse !
Ashford Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 4:26 PM
LOL thank you Line Gauthier! You can call ne John Diamond :-)
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