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Venus Fly Trap

Carnivorous blooms hothouse fed, thick tonged in lolling herds. Feeding time is all day. The flies are introduced in humming shifts. By evening the electric buzz is dimmed, the curvaceous florals ingest; sticky throats absorb. One dilatory black fly drones on alone. Meaty flowers listen - wait.

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Date: 5/9/2021 12:51:00 AM
Oh wow! These man eating temptresses, I guage an alignment! Super kooky, morbid melancholy. (is first stanza herd supposed to be head)? Great either!
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Date: 5/8/2021 4:17:00 PM
Fun poem ~ Feeding time at the zoo / I mean greenhouse !
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/1/2021 4:26:00 PM
LOL thank you Line Gauthier! You can call ne John Diamond :-)

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