Venice

City centre water bender
bind it not make it hinder
puzzled boats lacking thoughts
paddles muddle thrine cuddle
leaving behind all the huddle

must i speak or forever keep
such beauty can never weep

doth thou art history
still remains mystery 
shrined still flickery

observed by human unusually
to love and pass all boundary
by boat by last its Venice
doth mess with Denice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mcconnell Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 7:28 AM
loved this Talin, was there this years when on holiday at Lake Garda, marvelous experience, an amazing city! love your rhyme here, truly splendid. blessings, Gordon
Kalishian Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Thank you so much for these beautiful words.. I have been there only in my dreams.. I am so happy you liked it a true visitor.. finds it true it means alot ;)
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