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Venice

City centre water bender bind it not make it hinder puzzled boats lacking thoughts paddles muddle thrine cuddle leaving behind all the huddle must i speak or forever keep such beauty can never weep doth thou art history still remains mystery shrined still flickery observed by human unusually to love and pass all boundary by boat by last its Venice doth mess with Denice

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Date: 10/13/2016 7:28:00 AM
loved this Talin, was there this years when on holiday at Lake Garda, marvelous experience, an amazing city! love your rhyme here, truly splendid. blessings, Gordon
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/13/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for these beautiful words.. I have been there only in my dreams.. I am so happy you liked it a true visitor.. finds it true it means alot ;)

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