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vengeful vultures

I see beyond the ravenous talons of vengeful vultures, draped in crests of fluorescent blue, bleeding deception in burning solitude~ e c l i p s e d ... amidst their heart, bruised by resentment...

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/21/2025 3:56:00 PM

Awesome write, Inky. I find Vultures really ghastly and repulsive, lol

Ink Empress
Date: 4/21/2025 7:57:00 PM

Its so good to see you in my comments dear EI, thank you!!! So very much

Paul Bell

Date: 4/21/2025 5:41:00 AM

I was drawn to, Vengeful vultures. Every animal has its job, it seems, and the vultures do theirs well. Transfer that to the human vulture, and the vulture becomes a maligned creature, it seems. Great thinking poem.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/21/2025 7:57:00 PM

Yes maligned so many; thank you dear Paul, always appreciate your visits

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/19/2025 8:02:00 AM

Are they also vulgar.? The vengeful vulgar vultures..? Can only be so whilst inhabiting Earth.' Btw those words only occupy two inches Of space as I see it ink.? Damn cramped it must Be 'if you are in there?' LOL))) Anyway what do I Know.? I am leaving that up to God more and More these days.' I know SI says He does not beleive in Him.' Well I can't ignore anyone that I Have met." I fo keep it that real.' All blessings as The wind does change.' So do fortunes in the main.'

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/19/2025 9:44:00 AM

Well I thought SI said He did Not.? Maybe he meant religion? If so I have it wrong.' Anyway thanks for Replying.)

Ink Empress
Date: 4/19/2025 8:11:00 AM

Who is SI ? I do believe in God, this poem has nothing to do with God. And if You are referring to silent one, he believes in God too. Thank you for your thought provoking response

Karen Jones

Date: 4/18/2025 3:10:00 PM

So good of you to see past their flawed souls! Love this!

Ink Empress
Date: 4/19/2025 5:47:00 AM

Thank you so much always for being so supportive, im grateful

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 4/18/2025 11:29:00 AM

ravenous talons of vengeful vultures, mmmmm the intensity is divine there!!!! draped in crests of fluorescent blue,.. oh wow!!! Love the hint of softness.. bleeding deception in burning solitude .. ooooo look at how you make pain flow!!! Absolutely flawless… bruised by resentment. Ooooo yess!!! Perfect ending papi!!! Love the blazing fire vibe to it!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 4/19/2025 5:34:00 AM

Papi thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2025 10:27:00 AM

There is certainly a lot of them about, we have to be ever vigilant. Have a lovely weekend IE. Tom

Ink Empress
Date: 4/19/2025 5:34:00 AM

So true dear tom, thank you for always being so kind and supportive, i am grateful truly

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/18/2025 9:05:00 AM

Wonderful. XXX

Ink Empress
Date: 4/19/2025 5:12:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit. Appreciate it

Tom Woody

Date: 4/18/2025 8:31:00 AM

Whoa dudette! This packs a punch, right in the gut. Vengeful, jealous vultures be gettin' under my skin too. Fosho. Hope your day is awesome

Ink Empress
Date: 4/19/2025 4:45:00 AM

Its a very kind one , compared to my usual rants, im just having a tired weekend, thank you for your support always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2025 7:40:00 AM

- "bleeding deception in burning solitude" ... well described by the theme vengeful vultures, Ink - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 4/19/2025 4:43:00 AM

Thank you so much dear anne lise, always appreciate your kind support