Venetian Blinds...
Levels horizontally fixed
angles of light are tightly fit
geometrically spaced slats
fragmenting our perception flat
Narrowed slits squinted view
awkward sight for most in lewd
unaware of drawstring near
lifting veils vision clear.....
Trapped below the shadow of self
angled heights obscuring shelf
empty pantry up above
as lower self continues shove
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