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Venereal Virgin

VENEREAL VIRGIN Inviolable virgin so fair, pure - pomp and circumstance. Flexible ballerina doll, toes always pointed - free lance. Sparkle and shine from your Rapunzle-tower. Your courageous father makes tendrils* cower. He abates, as he’s taught you to hate common snakes. He licks his venomous lips, offering sacrificial fakes. Your dance card rolls out the red carpet, lust kisses each sanctimonious step you take. The bait hisses. You smile he faints. You faint he smiles. Your charms outwit. He’s spinning on a spit. Spit hits your high, and mighty eye, penetrating. Eye wash only spreads the disease - degenerating. 4/25/2017 Word Play Images, Dense & Pithy - Poetry Contest *Potential suitors

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Date: 4/26/2017 8:53:00 AM
This poem I read a few times, and it keeps taking me to different places, Kim! For sure it adequately fits the requirements of this contest's theme. #7 Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 4/26/2017 8:09:00 AM
Amazing 'word play images', Kim! Love it! Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2017 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra xx
Date: 4/26/2017 4:04:00 AM
Great poem Kim, a lot of imagery to this. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2017 5:12:00 AM
Thank you, Maria!
Date: 4/25/2017 5:41:00 PM
Very creative and abstract but perfect for the contest Kim. (I got it right that time) :) Best wishes on your entry my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 5:44:00 PM
Thanks, Chris! :)
Date: 4/25/2017 4:59:00 PM
Wow an awful lot going on in the head of this young lady...good luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thanks, Fredric!
Date: 4/25/2017 4:59:00 PM
Wow, there is a lot packed into your poem, Kim. Good luck with the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes!

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