Veneration

He steals across the courtyard, 
the ardent lover anxious to surprise, 
edging ever forward, 
with fiery consummation as his prize. 

His blushes blossom bright and hot, 
as he lays forth his course and his intent, 
ever nearer to the trellises, 
the shadows shrink, now no impediment. 

At his zenith he is seen by all, 
our blessed sphere in full display, 
inviting those who would to stand in awe, 
to pray, and then go safely on their way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Goudreau Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 5:37 PM
This is brilliantly crafted. How much talent is this? Wow, breathtakingly beautiful. You are so so talented. Thank you for sharing your expertise. Hugs,,
Onclaud Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 1:31 AM
your images take me to a place that possesses something different, something incredible, something benign, keith... the 'ardent lover' is very interesting and symbolical....love the backing to this one!.. impressive spiritual chime!..:) huggs
Alvez Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Enjoyable read! Cynthia
Horsman Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:41 PM
Awesome poem here, Keith, love this
Wesley Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Your words are a means to satisfaction and that's what I find in this.
Grisetti Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Truly lovely work,
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 11:38 AM
I agree with Russell, this is brilliant!! awesome personification, Kieth, as always.
Sivey Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Brilliant, a simply brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed this incredible poem Kieth! What a fruitful display of love, Great Work!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 10:18 AM
"An ardent lover", how nice, like it Keith xx
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 5:27 AM
Beautiful written poem Keith. - Have a lovely Sunday and a very good new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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