Venerable Sky

Venerable sky so vaunted so blue
Meandering pastels freely spew
Lofty visions dicharge anew
Clouded memories stealthfully skew
New horizons, sharp vistas brew
Panoramic scenes vividly hew
Lucid images swirl in your airy stew
Fleeting dreams soar from my view
Fresh perspective in your realm preview
Froward fantasies from your borders mew
Sink streams of hope into your purview
A wide range of blessings artfully cue
Polluting substances filter in your purifying  flue
From your soaring loft colorful contrasts renew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 16, 2010 at 6:09 AM
A fresh view of sky, your form is MONORHYME a sonnet has this end rhyme pattern abab cdcd efef gg/ like hope bike soap/ abab I enjoyed the verse very much. Light & Love
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