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Venerable Sky

Venerable sky so vaunted so blue Meandering pastels freely spew Lofty visions dicharge anew Clouded memories stealthfully skew New horizons, sharp vistas brew Panoramic scenes vividly hew Lucid images swirl in your airy stew Fleeting dreams soar from my view Fresh perspective in your realm preview Froward fantasies from your borders mew Sink streams of hope into your purview A wide range of blessings artfully cue Polluting substances filter in your purifying flue From your soaring loft colorful contrasts renew

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Date: 10/16/2010 6:09:00 AM
A fresh view of sky, your form is MONORHYME a sonnet has this end rhyme pattern abab cdcd efef gg/ like hope bike soap/ abab I enjoyed the verse very much. Light & Love
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