Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

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Velvet Orb

An orb of velvet bleeds across the skies

Nearer she flares to warm my night's caress;

Bestowing tints of her rare paradise 

When moon of heaven gushes to fluoresce!



Supermoon Eclipse Contest: Eve Roper
10/4/2015

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Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2015 at 1:03 PM gosh, first time to see this one. I just LOVE it, Nette. a most well deserved win. Congratulations.

Skat A October 9, 2015 at 12:24 AM Hi Nette, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2015 at 3:31 PM Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 8, 2015 at 2:31 AM Yet another wonderful write n win nette! Congrats on superb win!

Balveen Cheema October 7, 2015 at 8:04 PM Like velvet you slided to win! Congrats Nette! Love

Jan Allison October 7, 2015 at 2:21 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper October 7, 2015 at 2:20 PM Nette, thank you so very much for participating in my contest. Big congratulations on your win. Eve

Dan Cwiak October 7, 2015 at 1:28 PM Interestingly provocative write. Congrats!

Kp Nunez October 6, 2015 at 7:19 AM Impressive write, as always, Nette. May I just say i agree with Monterey's observation? I learned something today! All the best! huggs!

John Fleming October 5, 2015 at 1:26 PM Rich in content and beautifully expressed! My very best regards, Nette! :) john

Njeri Hunjeri October 4, 2015 at 5:59 PM Magnificent! i love how you dance those words. I so much enjoyed:-)

Monterey Sirak October 4, 2015 at 6:53 AM Astounding write! Your use of words brings the moon to life....she bleeds, flares and gushes! She doesn't just sit in the sky calmly.

Michael Tor October 3, 2015 at 11:45 PM Nette love the images you express. Nice entry.

Arthur Vaso October 3, 2015 at 8:08 PM Spectacular! Loved this! A7

Frederic Parker October 3, 2015 at 6:45 PM Another beautiful poem..good luck in the contest

Norma Arana October 3, 2015 at 4:37 PM The first line grabbed me with the delightful poetic devise my intermittent memory refuses to extract the name from my flaky mind.A full appreciation of the new supermoon moon with literary wonder is exquisite!

Jan Allison October 3, 2015 at 4:00 PM Stunning imagery Nette and I love the title too:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Leonidas October 3, 2015 at 2:51 PM Interesting poem

Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2015 at 2:50 PM - One word is enough: Beautiful! - I wish you good luck for the contest .... and a lovely weekend, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)