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An orb of velvet bleeds across the skies Nearer she flares to warm my night's caress; Bestowing tints of her rare paradise When moon of heaven gushes to fluoresce! Supermoon Eclipse Contest: Eve Roper 10/4/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2015 1:03:00 PM

gosh, first time to see this one. I just LOVE it, Nette. a most well deserved win. Congratulations.

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:24:00 AM

Hi Nette, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2015 3:31:00 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:31:00 AM

Yet another wonderful write n win nette! Congrats on superb win!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/7/2015 8:04:00 PM

Like velvet you slided to win! Congrats Nette! Love

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 2:21:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2015 2:20:00 PM

Nette, thank you so very much for participating in my contest. Big congratulations on your win. Eve

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/7/2015 1:28:00 PM

Interestingly provocative write. Congrats!

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/6/2015 7:19:00 AM

Impressive write, as always, Nette. May I just say i agree with Monterey's observation? I learned something today! All the best! huggs!

John Fleming

Date: 10/5/2015 1:26:00 PM

Rich in content and beautifully expressed! My very best regards, Nette! :) john

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 10/4/2015 5:59:00 PM

Magnificent! i love how you dance those words. I so much enjoyed:-)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/4/2015 6:53:00 AM

Astounding write! Your use of words brings the moon to life....she bleeds, flares and gushes! She doesn't just sit in the sky calmly.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/3/2015 11:45:00 PM

Nette love the images you express. Nice entry.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/3/2015 8:08:00 PM

Spectacular! Loved this! A7

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/3/2015 6:45:00 PM

Another beautiful poem..good luck in the contest

Norma Arana

Date: 10/3/2015 4:37:00 PM

The first line grabbed me with the delightful poetic devise my intermittent memory refuses to extract the name from my flaky mind.A full appreciation of the new supermoon moon with literary wonder is exquisite!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 4:00:00 PM

Stunning imagery Nette and I love the title too:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Leonidas

Date: 10/3/2015 2:51:00 PM

Interesting poem

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2015 2:50:00 PM

- One word is enough: Beautiful! - I wish you good luck for the contest .... and a lovely weekend, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)