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Written: April 7, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France "Quote: We, like the moon, must go through phases of brightness and darkness, yet we survive. By Poet" *************** In comfort, finest pearl, we tread, sad times brighten with organic cheer. Pledged love without pretentious fear, hand in hand through the darkness led. Sunset drawings on life's paintbrush grew, Oasis revealed where dreams dwell deep. Walk on a razor's edge with truths to seep, Aspirations surged above the sky's hue. The moon sailed on the velvet sky, and dust fell, Eager song in Zephyr light, as solace, dwells.

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Date: 4/21/2025 10:12:00 AM
Gorgeous poetry, Sotto - delicate as the moon
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Date: 4/13/2025 9:59:00 PM
Lovely quote and lovely extension of it in the poem. Yes, we have to go through the ups and downs of life. Yet we survive through our perseverance and resilience. The moon sailing in velvet sky is such an enchanting scene. Dreams dwelling in the oasis of life is another enlivening image. Altogether, a beautiful poem, dear Lasaad. Congratulations on your top placement.
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Date: 4/13/2025 7:40:00 PM
Beautiful quote and lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/13/2025 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this poetry contest with a masterly write on the ups and downs o life. The imagery of the moon phases is very appealing and relevant. Also loved very much your quote. Wish you a pleasant day filled with the blessings of light.
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Date: 4/13/2025 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this poetry contest with a masterly write on the ups and downs o life. The imagery of the moon phases is very appealing and relevant. Also loved very much your quote. Wish you a pleasant day filled with the blessings of light.
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Date: 4/13/2025 10:27:00 AM
- Back with a congrats on your winning poem, Las :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 4/13/2025 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write, quote and picture. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Date: 4/9/2025 8:36:00 AM
SP, sounds like a description of happy times in life...even when there is some sadness. I suppose that must be inevitable since our joy cannot last forever. Take care, sir!! Smiles!
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Date: 4/7/2025 11:25:00 AM
lIKE THIS. bEAUTIFUL POEM.
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Date: 4/7/2025 11:08:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - A contest that fills up quickly and is fun to participate in :) - hugs
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