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Velvet Moon Zephyr Song

Written: April 7, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

"Quote: We, like the moon, must go through phases of brightness and darkness, yet we survive. By Poet"

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In comfort, finest pearl, we tread,
sad times brighten with organic cheer.
Pledged love without pretentious fear,
hand in hand through the darkness led.

Sunset drawings on life's paintbrush grew,
Oasis revealed where dreams dwell deep.
Walk on a razor's edge with truths to seep,
Aspirations surged above the sky's hue.

The moon sailed on the velvet sky, and dust fell,
Eager song in Zephyr light, as solace, dwells.

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Paige Hind April 21, 2025 at 10:12 AM Gorgeous poetry, Sotto - delicate as the moon

Valsa George April 13, 2025 at 9:59 PM Lovely quote and lovely extension of it in the poem. Yes, we have to go through the ups and downs of life. Yet we survive through our perseverance and resilience. The moon sailing in velvet sky is such an enchanting scene. Dreams dwelling in the oasis of life is another enlivening image. Altogether, a beautiful poem, dear Lasaad. Congratulations on your top placement.

thriveni c mysore April 13, 2025 at 7:40 PM Beautiful quote and lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Krishnanand Guptar April 13, 2025 at 11:47 AM Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this poetry contest with a masterly write on the ups and downs o life. The imagery of the moon phases is very appealing and relevant. Also loved very much your quote. Wish you a pleasant day filled with the blessings of light.

Krishnanand Guptar April 13, 2025 at 11:47 AM Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this poetry contest with a masterly write on the ups and downs o life. The imagery of the moon phases is very appealing and relevant. Also loved very much your quote. Wish you a pleasant day filled with the blessings of light.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2025 at 10:27 AM - Back with a congrats on your winning poem, Las :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2025 at 8:29 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write, quote and picture. Have a blessed day with your win................

Duke Beaufort April 9, 2025 at 8:36 AM SP, sounds like a description of happy times in life...even when there is some sadness. I suppose that must be inevitable since our joy cannot last forever. Take care, sir!! Smiles!

Jay Narain April 7, 2025 at 11:25 AM lIKE THIS. bEAUTIFUL POEM.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2025 at 11:08 AM - Beautifully written, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - A contest that fills up quickly and is fun to participate in :) - hugs