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Velvet Minds

One more hot, deserted and silent road I have chosen this path in life This lonely domain of thinkers Some neurotic, some shy, some bold- Rare do I find those who belong in this domain- When we do cross paths a jubilant solemnization it is- Only once in a silver raindrop does this happen Share words and ideas- never anything to explain As our velvet minds are then one We sway, sing and dance with the trees And wood nymphs only we can see- so rare Fires burn bright- we travel to and beyond the heavens in one night All under an orange moon, phantoms of Thinkers past, waltzing with a slow seacoast breeze Inside my mind I feel velvet A delicate, downy cushion brushing my lobes That feeling is like breathing fresh air for the first time A sentience angels would covet- As our velvet minds are then one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/30/2014 9:12:00 PM
AMY, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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Date: 4/26/2014 7:09:00 PM
I remember this one. It's so creative. Congrats on the winners list!
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:30:00 AM
Beautiful...where velvety words bring a feeling of belonging. congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Date: 4/26/2014 1:17:00 AM
Amy, stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. if ya like:) ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA
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Date: 6/13/2012 5:48:00 PM
nicely done Amy
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Date: 6/11/2012 10:07:00 PM
what a lovely thought, velvet minds that become one. This is swimming with imagery!! wonderful.
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Date: 6/11/2012 5:03:00 AM
Its amazing to be able to let go widout need to explain.Beautiful write
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