Velvet Minds

One more hot, deserted and silent road
I have chosen this path in life
This lonely domain of thinkers
Some neurotic, some shy, some bold-

Rare do I find those who belong 
in this domain-
When we do cross paths a jubilant solemnization
it is-
Only once in a silver raindrop does this happen
Share words and ideas- never anything to explain

As our velvet minds are then one

We sway, sing and dance with the trees
And wood nymphs only we can see- so rare
Fires burn bright- we travel to and beyond the heavens in one night
All under an orange moon, phantoms of Thinkers past, waltzing
with a slow seacoast breeze

Inside my mind I feel velvet
A delicate, downy cushion brushing my lobes
That feeling is like breathing fresh air for the first time
A sentience angels would covet-

As our velvet minds are then one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/30/2014 9:12:00 PM
AMY, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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Date: 4/26/2014 7:09:00 PM
I remember this one. It's so creative. Congrats on the winners list!
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:30:00 AM
Beautiful...where velvety words bring a feeling of belonging. congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Date: 4/26/2014 1:17:00 AM
Amy, stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. if ya like:) ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA
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Date: 6/13/2012 5:48:00 PM
nicely done Amy
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Date: 6/11/2012 10:07:00 PM
what a lovely thought, velvet minds that become one. This is swimming with imagery!! wonderful.
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Date: 6/11/2012 5:03:00 AM
Its amazing to be able to let go widout need to explain.Beautiful write
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