Velvet Kisses

Kissing the velvet Oh how soft Cushioney Gentle on my lips Spit, spit Wipe, Wipe Cough, Choke That pillow isn't a bloke

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Janice Herzog

Date: 8/30/2009 9:21:00 AM

Dear Sara: Cute, and sweet also. Nice surprisxe ending. Loved it! Thank-you for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it! Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 8/29/2009 1:24:00 PM

A velvety bloke??? Hmmm...I might look for one :) Thank you, Sara, for your comment. Love, Iolanda

David Brown

Date: 8/29/2009 8:48:00 AM

Sara, Thank you for your kind words. Indeed we never know when it will be too late to tell someone we love how we feel. I enoyed your writing as well. I look forward to reading more

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/29/2009 8:29:00 AM

LOL!!! Hilarious. Love it! It's gone to my favorites. I hope I remember to forward it to my sister-in-law in England. LOL... Dane

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/29/2009 7:22:00 AM

cute mom have you been kissing rocky again?

Jen H.

Date: 8/29/2009 5:22:00 AM

Haha, don't I know the feeling! Sweet poem Sara, the last line sums it all up! ~Jen~