Velvet Kisses

Kissing the velvet
Oh how soft
Cushioney
Gentle on my lips

Spit, spit
Wipe, Wipe
Cough, Choke
That pillow isn't a bloke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Herzog Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Dear Sara: Cute, and sweet also. Nice surprisxe ending. Loved it! Thank-you for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it! Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
Scripca Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 1:24 PM
A velvety bloke??? Hmmm...I might look for one :) Thank you, Sara, for your comment. Love, Iolanda
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Sara, Thank you for your kind words. Indeed we never know when it will be too late to tell someone we love how we feel. I enoyed your writing as well. I look forward to reading more
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 8:29 AM
LOL!!! Hilarious. Love it! It's gone to my favorites. I hope I remember to forward it to my sister-in-law in England. LOL... Dane
Culverhouse Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 7:22 AM
cute mom have you been kissing rocky again?
H. Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 5:22 AM
Haha, don't I know the feeling! Sweet poem Sara, the last line sums it all up! ~Jen~
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