Paul Callus Poet Lanterne

Veiled Threat

sand
                           flying
                           hazily
                       in a desert
                           storm

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              Contest: Lanterne Frenzy
                 Sponsor: Ir0nic Zink

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James Fraser April 5, 2015 at 2:18 PM Sandstorm captured in so few words. With so many sandstorms in the deserts around the world, it makes me wonder as to what lies beneath them // James.... Paul Callus April 5, 2015 at 3:17 PM I am sure many places of interest are buried beneath layers of sand...who knows how many lives have been lost in deserts, too! Thank you for stopping by, considering it's stormy weather on my page:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 5, 2015 at 1:58 AM i've experience this myself.. caught on the road and just few miles you can see the sands.. weeeeeeee. scary!!! i mean zero visibility.. Paul Callus April 5, 2015 at 9:27 AM I know you have, Olive_eloi!! Would not want to be caught in one myself! I hate flying sand...it stings and gets everywhere! On the beach in calm weather it's totally different:) hugs // paul

Kim Shaw April 4, 2015 at 8:39 PM Hi Paul! It amazes me how so few words can convey such a big picture. Very effective choice of words. A 7!! Happy Easter to you and your family! Hugs, Kimberly Paul Callus April 5, 2015 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Kimberly, for both lovely comments and the 7 rating! I also wish you and your loved ones a very Blessed & Happy Easter! hugs // paul

Len Gasun April 4, 2015 at 11:12 AM I can picture perfectly the sandstorm in your awesome lanterne poem my very dear friend, Paul. Thank you so much for sharing! Have blessed Lenten and Easter Season to you and your family/loved ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora Paul Callus April 4, 2015 at 4:17 PM Thank you Leonora. Pleased that you found my little Lanterne to your liking. Thank you also for the Easter wishes; I too wish you a very Blessed and Happy Easter. Hugs /x/ paul

Charmaine Chircop April 4, 2015 at 10:18 AM Outstanding..So vivid the view of a sandstorm.I got caught in it .: ) Happy Easter,God bless you and your loves ones !! Paul Callus April 4, 2015 at 4:14 PM Hi Charm! Thank you for the positive feedback. A Happy Easter to you, too! // paul

Sara Kendrick April 4, 2015 at 6:34 AM Enjoyed experiencing your sandstorm..A real one would not be so good..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Paul Callus April 4, 2015 at 4:12 PM I am pleased that you enjoyed my mini sandstorm, Sara! Sure enough, better than a real one:) Take care. // paul

Jan Allison April 4, 2015 at 6:06 AM So few words say so much - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward April 4, 2015 at 4:09 AM I can see and taste that sand. // 7 // Hugs, Julia, xx Paul Callus April 4, 2015 at 4:11 PM Thank you Julia; appreciate the high rating. Happy Easter to you:) hugs // paul