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Veiled Threat

sand
                           flying
                           hazily
                       in a desert
                           storm

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              Contest: Lanterne Frenzy
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James Fraser

Date: 4/5/2015 2:18:00 PM

Sandstorm captured in so few words. With so many sandstorms in the deserts around the world, it makes me wonder as to what lies beneath them // James....

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 3:17:00 PM

I am sure many places of interest are buried beneath layers of sand...who knows how many lives have been lost in deserts, too! Thank you for stopping by, considering it's stormy weather on my page:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/5/2015 1:58:00 AM

i've experience this myself.. caught on the road and just few miles you can see the sands.. weeeeeeee. scary!!! i mean zero visibility..

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 9:27:00 AM

I know you have, Olive_eloi!! Would not want to be caught in one myself! I hate flying sand...it stings and gets everywhere! On the beach in calm weather it's totally different:) hugs // paul

Kim Shaw

Date: 4/4/2015 8:39:00 PM

Hi Paul! It amazes me how so few words can convey such a big picture. Very effective choice of words. A 7!! Happy Easter to you and your family! Hugs, Kimberly

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2015 9:37:00 AM

Thank you, Kimberly, for both lovely comments and the 7 rating! I also wish you and your loved ones a very Blessed & Happy Easter! hugs // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 4/4/2015 11:12:00 AM

I can picture perfectly the sandstorm in your awesome lanterne poem my very dear friend, Paul. Thank you so much for sharing! Have blessed Lenten and Easter Season to you and your family/loved ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Paul Callus
Date: 4/4/2015 4:17:00 PM

Thank you Leonora. Pleased that you found my little Lanterne to your liking. Thank you also for the Easter wishes; I too wish you a very Blessed and Happy Easter. Hugs /x/ paul