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Vehemence

If your love were a flame I'd allow it to blaze through me and singe the edges of my heart with it's sweltering fierceness but your admiration is a thick-headed icicle shaped to weather any firestorm ignited by adoring hands how gelid it is to be loved by a man frozen with incompetence, too cool to burn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/25/2008 4:57:00 PM
This does not sound like the right man for you. An incredible put down, is what I might say. Extremely well written. And a terrible shame. So sorry. So powerful with your words. Love, Shar
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