Vegas

Is it the off season or the mass murders are killing the Strip Las Vegas right now is a bargain so plan on making that trip Come lose your money Bring your honey But bring your wallet, common sense you can skip

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/9/2017 9:29:00 AM

$3.85 I lost//pretty cheap, that cost//to learn the win//is mostly spin//the whole idea I tossed. ENTERTAIN ON SHOWMAN JACK — you're better than Vegas any day!!!

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/9/2017 9:48:00 AM

Sn....? Sn..sN...SN... sn__? (Can't bring myself to say it!) My sympathy amigosan!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 9:42:00 AM

Not a gambler, my friend!!! Makes no sense... odds are ridiculous! Odds are better that even I will wake up tomorrow! Snow flurries predicted tonight! AND IT STARTS!!!

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2017 8:40:00 AM

Oh..... thats not good advice...

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 8:51:00 AM

Never been... never will!!! Odds are definitely stacked against us!!! HAVE A GREAT REST OF THURSDAY!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2017 6:20:00 AM

What a funny write, I thought you were going some other philosophical way when I read the first line...such a sad thing that happened in Vegas...we are having too many senseless killings all around us! What is going on? But yes, I bet the trip to Vegas is really cheap right now...trying to get people to come there is probably really tough right now! What a remarkable poem, Great Work my friend!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2017 6:29:00 AM

Seems a tragedy happens every second day!!! GOOD MORNING RUSSELL!