Vegas

Is it the off season or the mass murders are killing the Strip Las Vegas right now is a bargain so plan on making that trip Come lose your money Bring your honey But bring your wallet, common sense you can skip
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 9, 2017 at 9:29 AM
$3.85 I lost//pretty cheap, that cost//to learn the win//is mostly spin//the whole idea I tossed. ENTERTAIN ON SHOWMAN JACK — you're better than Vegas any day!!!
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November 9, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Sn....? Sn..sN...SN... sn__? (Can't bring myself to say it!) My sympathy amigosan!
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November 9, 2017 at 9:42 AM
Not a gambler, my friend!!! Makes no sense... odds are ridiculous! Odds are better that even I will wake up tomorrow! Snow flurries predicted tonight! AND IT STARTS!!!
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November 9, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Oh..... thats not good advice...
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November 9, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Never been... never will!!! Odds are definitely stacked against us!!! HAVE A GREAT REST OF THURSDAY!!!
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November 9, 2017 at 6:20 AM
What a funny write, I thought you were going some other philosophical way when I read the first line...such a sad thing that happened in Vegas...we are having too many senseless killings all around us! What is going on? But yes, I bet the trip to Vegas is really cheap right now...trying to get people to come there is probably really tough right now! What a remarkable poem, Great Work my friend!!
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November 9, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Seems a tragedy happens every second day!!! GOOD MORNING RUSSELL!
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