Vegas

VEGAS the soft underbelly you painted it well, and brought out the sorry, and almost the smell, where the pimps n the drug dealers, glide, with some only there 4 the ride, as the waves of emotion, do tell, and others held by the spell, have their cash on the, ultimate, SLIDE Don re Debbie Duncan "Sin City"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Duncan Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 2:07 AM
Well, this is a right nice phrase of words :)
Maverick Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Its a good one I reckon Don, not having been there myself..' giving you a 7.. I saw you put this on facebook, I nip on there now and again, keep well, Joe.'
Johnson Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 2:06 AM
thanks Joe old mate...
Nance Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:19 PM
sinfully seductive...vegas has neglect and appeal!
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