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Vd Does Not Stand For Valentine's Day

I picked my broken heart up off the floor
From where you threw it, pursuing that whore
I sewed it up
Without your love
Hoping a VD would soon even the score!


1/27/12

lost lovelimerick

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Painted Hunter

February 18, 2013 at 6:58 AM

I love your sense of humor...congrats on the win!

Ralph Taylor

February 17, 2013 at 5:09 PM

Congrats, Susan. Nice going. xxxRalph

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 17, 2013 at 5:06 AM

- A unique Valentines poem, it had to win! - CONGRATULATIONS, B.E.S. !! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mehnaz Veetil

February 17, 2013 at 2:28 AM

good one...congratulations...

Len Gasun

February 16, 2013 at 10:48 PM

Congratulations my dear friend Susan for your heartfelt write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora

Joseph May

February 16, 2013 at 6:04 PM

congrats on your win Susan

Richard Lamoureux

February 16, 2013 at 4:42 PM

Now that was a surprise! To funny, congrats. I like your twist.

Kim Merryman

February 16, 2013 at 4:39 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

February 16, 2013 at 3:34 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

February 16, 2013 at 3:24 PM

Congratulations on your fine win!

Poet Destroyer A

February 16, 2013 at 2:14 PM

ha ha Funny Susan, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and umumum poem. always & forever *LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 16, 2012 at 11:13 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

April 14, 2012 at 10:55 AM

So cute this is!! Congratulations on your win!

Cecilia Macfarlane

April 14, 2012 at 7:17 AM

LOL....we all have that hope when betrayed. Excellent limerick...congrats on your win!

Deborah Burch

April 14, 2012 at 6:34 AM

LOL...good time a day,girl!!! Congratulations on your win!! I have seen the expressions of the recipients of those who have to receive the very large needles full of quite viscous and painfully absorbed medicine of which I had the pleasure of administering...LOL...to some that probably could have written your poem!! LOL...Good one!! big hugs,Cuz...love,deb

Gwendolen Song

April 14, 2012 at 5:52 AM

Now that's MY KIND OF HUMOR!!! Pick an STD; any one...or 2!!! ha ha...Congrats Susan. As tho you heart were disposable, right?...NOT!!!! lOVE, gWENDOLEN

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2012 at 10:28 PM

Susan, wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 13, 2012 at 10:16 PM

super congrats on a first plade win Susan luv..

Jack Horne

February 15, 2012 at 1:45 PM

LOL, love it - I just had to read this one, Susan.

Riekie Briel

February 4, 2012 at 4:05 PM

Cool beans and right to the point with such female passion and zest. I like when I find your straight arrow poems, because I think you do well in this manner of writing. Good.