Vault In the Attic

A Vault In the Attic holds Photos and keepsakes Treasured as a golden nugget Holding the far memories that persist over time Yearning secretly that a time machine would exist to bring back the past left behind 1-24-2016

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Matthew Anish

Date: 1/24/2016 8:13:00 PM

A time machine would be a great invention. So far it exists only in fiction. Pythagoras said "Time is the river I go fishing in". Stimulating poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/24/2016 8:51:00 PM

Thank you very much for your feedback Matthew.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/24/2016 5:00:00 PM

Very vivid descriptive write Nayda. Until such time as a time machine exists at least we can hold on to our memories of the past:-) hugs jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/24/2016 5:02:00 PM

Very wise words Jan. Thank you.