Vast

Vagrant diamond stars teem,
Various in color.
Veering hued planets whirl-
Velocity dancers!
Vernal and infinite,
Vibrant universe dark.
Vintage colors abound!


Written on May 4, 2021
For: Pleiades V Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 4:40 PM
congrats for the win, Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 12:11 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest - A skillful writing, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Anne-Lise. hugs, Evelyn :D
Merryman Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Our universe is a great example of "Vast". Congrats on your win, Evelyn! Blessings, Kim M
Buehler Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 11:32 AM
You have my heartfelt thanks for honoring me with a win, Kim. I have enjoyed your pleiades contests so much! Have a lovely day! Evelyn
Eslinger Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 7:38 PM
Very well conceived! All the best Sally
Buehler Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 8:53 PM
Thank you, Sally
Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 12:56 AM
Here's to a win for your 'V-team!' Cheers, gw
Buehler Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 11:47 AM
I appreciate that so much, Gershon. :D
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Velocity dancers!
Buehler Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Yup! :D
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 10:44 PM
Very good use of the words beginning with a V. Best for a win.
Buehler Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 10:29 AM
You're very kind. Thank you, Victor.
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 6:21 PM
You've been wearing your 'smarty pants' again. Very clever my friend.
Buehler Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:48 PM
That is really nice to know. Thank you, David.
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