Vast

Vagrant diamond stars teem,
Various in color.
Veering hued planets whirl-
Velocity dancers!
Vernal and infinite,
Vibrant universe dark.
Vintage colors abound!


Written on May 4, 2021
For: Pleiades V Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/9/2021 4:40:00 PM
congrats for the win, Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/9/2021 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 5/8/2021 12:11:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest - A skillful writing, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/8/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Anne-Lise. hugs, Evelyn :D
Date: 5/8/2021 8:01:00 AM
Our universe is a great example of "Vast". Congrats on your win, Evelyn! Blessings, Kim M
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/8/2021 11:32:00 AM
You have my heartfelt thanks for honoring me with a win, Kim. I have enjoyed your pleiades contests so much! Have a lovely day! Evelyn
Date: 5/6/2021 7:38:00 PM
Very well conceived! All the best Sally
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/6/2021 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Sally
Date: 5/6/2021 12:56:00 AM
Here's to a win for your 'V-team!' Cheers, gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/6/2021 11:47:00 AM
I appreciate that so much, Gershon. :D
Date: 5/5/2021 9:25:00 AM
Velocity dancers!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/5/2021 10:27:00 AM
Yup! :D
Date: 5/4/2021 10:44:00 PM
Very good use of the words beginning with a V. Best for a win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/5/2021 10:29:00 AM
You're very kind. Thank you, Victor.
Date: 5/4/2021 6:21:00 PM
You've been wearing your 'smarty pants' again. Very clever my friend.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/4/2021 7:48:00 PM
That is really nice to know. Thank you, David.
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