Vasava - An Untold Story 11/Many

Vasava – 
An untold story                                                                        11/Many



It appeared that Rati* the wife of love God Cupid
Had come before the Shiva* the God of destruction
To charm and disturb his meditation
Thus taking the strength of God Shiva* 
For saving her husband the Kamadava*

By expressing shyness through her beautiful eyelids
She had added only more charms to her lovely face
And by filling a touch of passions,  in her slow movements
Vasava was adding only more restlessness among all those
Who were watching,  the legendry Vasava on the stage

By listening the heart touching sound of her Gold Noopurs*
All became enchanted, while listening the sound of its music
Even the lamps which were burning to spread the light
Increased their flames, as if they too wanted to see the beauty
Thus illuminating the beauty of the dancer more and many fold

King Udiyan and King Suyodhan, both were watching Vasava
Almost spell bound, as if her beauty had charmed them completely
As the beauty of a full bloomed flower 
Often takes away our heart and mind together
Udiyan was feeling as if, Vasava had stolen his heart completely

She started her first song of the day, by reciting a welcome song
Attributed to King Suyodhan, who was lost in the dreams of Vasava
She sang ‘Priya Tum Aaye ho dwar hamare, Vandan Abhinandan Hamare’*
The Alap* which she started from the slow pitch of voice 
Went high enough to touch the hearts of every one who was there



Ravindra 					26th March 2010


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* The song lines are in Hindi which can be recited in English with its 
   Explanation in English

* Priya Tum Aaye ho dwar hamare, 		
   Vandan Abhinandan Humare’
   Nagar Dwar Sub Sujre Savre
   Aathitya Sewkar Karo Tum Humre

Translation 
You have come to our door, O dear 
We welcome you and greet you 
All the houses and doors are set a new  
And are ready to welcome you, ( O God like) Guest of ours
You have come to our door, O most dear
Please accept and be our Guest. 


* Shiva		Constituting the trinity of Hindu Gods, Shiva performs the function 
                                    of the destroyer so that new life is created once again.

* Kamadava	Cupid or Kamadeva, the Vedic deity of Love astride his mount the 
                        parrot, whose form embodies Rati, his consort. Together these two 
            deities, Kama (Love) and Rati ( Desire) signified each other.
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Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 9:14 PM
vEry interesting how you talk about even the lamps increasing their flames to see and hear this goddess. I hope I did not miss any prior narrations to this lovely story .I will see you later. Luv, Andrea ps. thanks for seeing my footles.
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March 29, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Thankxxx for your exquisite compliment on my Jubilant poem for the new contest.. I will miss u for a few days as u will not be here or on PP but please let me know when u return so I can continue reading the series u are creating and posting.. so lovely .. so imaginative.. so elegant..so eloquent.. my dear friend Ravindra..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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March 26, 2010 at 3:48 PM
A most beautiful poem of beauty and intensity of motion.. I would post this one on PP as a glimpse into the series of poems for readers to look forward to as this one has a pure quality of intrigue about it and many will relate.. lovely Ravindra..see u later tonight on PP..thankxxx for alerting me.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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March 26, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Very alluring and captivitating write.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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