Vapour Trials

Thundering across the sky, storm clouds joust to oust the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 3:36 PM
Love the internal rhyming. Congrats here
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 2:01 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful line, Peter :) - hugs
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