vapor eyes

moist-your-eyes...
then
arise...

sane-it-eyes...
and
nature-all-eyes...


len
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Godwin Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 9:57 AM
CLEVER! Impressed me. I leave giggling.
Blown Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 4:01 AM
thank you......life is a......slide through mass and energy.......kind of a toboggan downhill 4d slide.........relaxxxxxxx.............len
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