Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Vantage Point

She is afraid of suspect spaces,
with sparse starlight, ancient arches,
abyss-steps, swinging lanterns &

comforted by a moonlit garden,
an expansive sky of navy blue,
glitter-stars in an elocutionary’s box.

5/20/2023
Bitsize Contest 64
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Victor Buhagiar May 21, 2023 at 6:10 AM Fine poem in free verse. Best for a win, Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2023 at 6:12 AM Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim

Gershon Wolf May 20, 2023 at 9:10 PM Wow! Your dazzling imagery in this dynamic 'bite-sizer' packs an impressive punch, Poetess! Awesome! ~ gsw Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2023 at 6:14 AM Thank you! The first half inspired by an exhibit “Evelyn Hofer: Eyes On The City”

Sotto Poet May 20, 2023 at 1:27 PM Extraordinary poetry about a remarkable subject, Good luck with the contest Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2023 at 6:20 PM Thank you, Lasaad! Hugs ~ Kim