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She is afraid of suspect spaces, with sparse starlight, ancient arches, abyss-steps, swinging lanterns & comforted by a moonlit garden, an expansive sky of navy blue, glitter-stars in an elocutionary’s box. 5/20/2023 Bitsize Contest 64 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/21/2023 6:10:00 AM
Fine poem in free verse. Best for a win,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2023 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/20/2023 9:10:00 PM
Wow! Your dazzling imagery in this dynamic 'bite-sizer' packs an impressive punch, Poetess! Awesome! ~ gsw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2023 6:14:00 AM
Thank you! The first half inspired by an exhibit “Evelyn Hofer: Eyes On The City”
Date: 5/20/2023 1:27:00 PM
Extraordinary poetry about a remarkable subject, Good luck with the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! Hugs ~ Kim

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