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Vanquishing My Fears

As I lay in the cave of my mind Alone and in the dark My eyes opened to a beacon of light Leaking through these scattered thoughts I follow this sea reaching the shore That seamlessly is waving through me! Words swirling inside my mind As the eyes of this deep ocean within hypnotizes me As I float, in inexplicable emotions Flooding this refuge within me My heart caught in the middle carrying impatience Holding space, I journey through rising to a new dawn, working out my destiny 1.06.2021

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Date: 6/11/2021 12:44:00 PM
'Leaking through these scattered thoughts' Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/12/2021 1:19:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj :)
Date: 5/31/2021 11:26:00 AM
Hello Carol Mitra, this uplifting. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2021 10:55:00 AM
Hello Carol Mitra, you are welcome. Much love. Darlene
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/31/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thanks dear Darlene....much love :)
Date: 5/31/2021 2:22:00 AM
Outstanding poem, very deep in thought. Should do well in the contest.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/31/2021 4:30:00 AM
Thanks dear Victor....yes I was very deep in thought when I penned this poem....Take care :)
Date: 5/31/2021 2:16:00 AM
Theres always something better for us over the horizon, we keep marching on, never giving up and hope that the sun will shine in our hearts once more. Good luck in the contest Carol and enjoy your week. Tom
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/31/2021 4:29:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Tom...Yes hope is what keeps us going....much love :)

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