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My fat is falling My fat is falling I have falling fat My fat is falling My fat is falling My diet is Jack Sprat's My ribs now show My ribs now show My metabolism flows I see my toes I see my toes I fit into my clothes Now I'm lean Now I'm lean Skinny wolverine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/16/2020 6:53:00 AM
Skinny Wolverine! Wow! Great!
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Date: 5/15/2020 12:29:00 PM
I see my toes - something about that line sticks with me (and gives my feet a beat!) Time to grab my tennis shoes :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2020 12:40:00 PM
You get your tennis shoes; I'll get my sneakers. Then we can go toe-to-toe. lol. Thanks, Michelle
Date: 5/14/2020 10:48:00 PM
LOL...congratulations Jack! ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much. Feels great. ~ Action Jackson
Date: 5/14/2020 4:36:00 PM
If only lol, many are comfort eating in lockdown, if it carries on much longer they won't get through the front door. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2020 9:22:00 PM
Those comfort-eaters are stressed out; not me. Lucky, I guess. :) gw