Sotto Poet Poet Ghazal

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Vanished Verse

She appears with a poetic tinge but then melts into air
Her perfume like a burst of fragrance but then melts into air.

My dream was not effortless since I left the letters I kissed.
The endeared serves as the impetus but then melts into air.

O letter that enlightened me that she was real heartbeat? 
And the pulse of the heart's rhythm responds but then melts into air.

My darling poet, can you have even a mustard seed's worth?
Without no more partner in her heart, but then melts into air.

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Victor Buhagiar April 4, 2021 at 8:25 AM I have tried a few ghazals and know how difficult it is. I doubt I'll ever write another. You did very well. Sotto Poet April 4, 2021 at 9:04 AM Thanks Dear Freind Victor, I’m glad you like it, it’s interesting to try this Form and, I have some more under construction.

Eve Roper April 3, 2021 at 9:38 PM Lasaad, such a beautiful poem, the pulse of the heart's rhythm responds but then melts into air. Have a blessed Easter. Eve Sotto Poet April 4, 2021 at 7:03 AM I'm glad you like it, Dear Eve, thanks for the kind words and have a blessed day and happy Easter

L Milton Hankins April 3, 2021 at 7:26 PM I liked your poem, Lasaad, especially the refrain that is so ethereal, "but then melts into air." Thanks for writing and sharing this. Sotto Poet April 3, 2021 at 7:38 PM Hi Milton, I'm so glad you liked this poem, and thank you so much for your kind words; Have a great night, and Happy Easter.

Alexis Y. April 3, 2021 at 4:26 PM Hi Lasaad, You penned a deep verse that makes one think. The repeated line “ but then melts into the air” made a good poem more impactful. Have a great day and a Happy Easter:-) Alexis Sotto Poet April 3, 2021 at 4:46 PM Hi Alexis, I'm so glad you liked this poem, and thank you so much for your kind words; this is actually ghazal form that must have a repeated refrain. Have a blessed day and Happy Easter.