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Vanilla Moon

Vanilla moon of the billion star, milky night,
Peering over luxuriant treetops, evergreen.
Ivory clouds drift away to blues and bright,
On a spicy, pearl night, like none ever seen.

Daisy moon in onyx, all cream and chiffon,
With what loveliness is darkness enhanced.
Its alabaster rays pour upon a snowy swan-
Joy pranced on a path that sun last danced!

Copyright © Evelyn Judy Buehler | Year Posted 2023

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/10/2023 11:09:00 AM - Beautiful as we can only dream of...vanilla moon... daisy moon in onyx ... in delicious creamy chiffon ... love it, Evelyn :) - hugs Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/10/2023 12:20:00 PM Your kind words are so valued. Thank you very much. :)

Joe Dimino Date: 9/10/2023 9:32:00 AM "Daisy moon in onyx, all cream and chiffon, With what loveliness is darkness enhanced. Its alabaster rays pour upon a snowy swan- Joy pranced on a path that sun last danced!" Superb poetry...deep and delicious. Salivating for the next scoop. Love it! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/10/2023 12:18:00 PM Your treasured comment is a joy to read, Joe. Thank you. :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/10/2023 5:49:00 AM Vanilla moon of the billion star, milky night, Peering over luxuriant treetops, evergreen.... beautiful opening to a beautiful poem, Evelyn. Much enjoyed your descriptions that bring forth the imagery. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/10/2023 12:16:00 PM Thank you for your kind compliments, Vijay. It's a delight to read your comment. :)

Christina Bowring Date: 9/10/2023 3:36:00 AM Dear Evelyn this is so deliciously enchanting. So poetic full of breathtaking imagery. ‘Joy pranced on a path that sun last danced’. Glorious! The whole poem is so elegant. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/10/2023 12:12:00 PM Thank you, dear Christina, for your heartwarming, lovely response. I hope your day is blessed. :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/10/2023 1:34:00 AM With what loveliness is darkness enhanced: So true of your poetry. I love your muse efforts because they color my life. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/10/2023 12:08:00 PM Victor, that is so wonderful to know. Thank you for your words of inspiration and joy. :)

Ink Empress Date: 9/10/2023 1:21:00 AM I love the rhymes here and use of colors is so fitting for the theme of the poem. So well written and delivered. I especially loved “ ivory clouds drift away “ “ spicy pearl night” how creative and moving is this profound take on vanilla moon. Your way with writing is so eloquent. Goodluck for the contest Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/10/2023 12:04:00 PM Thank you so much for the pleasure of your very gratifying remarks, and thoughtful well wishes. I hope your day is blessed. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/9/2023 5:47:00 PM Ooh then you give us vanilla to imbibe! Cream and chiffon…ahh Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/10/2023 11:59:00 AM So happy you enjoyed the poem, Kim. Thank you. :)