Vampiric Dawn

The Dawn crept over the 
monochromatic hills
with the stealth of a vampire.
Bleeding into blue-black veined forest
through a lilac haze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 5:56 AM
Wow Deborah - What a wonderfully delightful way to describe the dawn - very original - God Bless, MJ
Degenhardt Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 5:52 AM
This is quite the dramatic read, offering an eerie tone with a darkness lingering. Love the almost gothic like imagery within this. Very well written. Michael
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