Vampires Vie Vixens

Vampires viewing veins, Voluptuous vixens valse; Vulpine verses vamps. " Unsure of the form, so Senryu won? " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/myth-fantasy.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 8:57 PM
a 'triple "V" of delight! jim
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 8:38 PM
This is a mighty tongue twister and a great write!
Chircop Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 8:18 PM
This senryu brought me sweet memories of the film"Dancing with the wolves"--,this senryu can take many forms-a battle one vulpine against many vamps whilst female foxes dance---reality of life---well penned my friend--charma
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July 3, 2009 at 8:09 PM
Great bit of alliteration in this tantalizing senryu, James. The vamps and vixens will revel in this write! Love, Carolyn
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