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Vampire Sonnets Ii the First Kill

With vampire eyes I slowly gazed at him, ready to go and stalk my first victim; Scanning the crowd in close proximity, wandering through the streets of the city; Speaking with a voice of hypnotic rhymes, whispers with the power to slow down time; Swept up in the passion of a slow kiss, unaware that lust was so dangerous; Nibbled on his neck scraping to a bite a loud moan, but absolutely no fight; He fell for the magic of every quip, went limp in my arms took the final sip; Power to seduce? Unbelievable; Partner left so proud, I made my first kill.

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Date: 11/15/2021 8:03:00 PM
Your Sonnet is exquisitely crafted with superb metaphors and stunning symbolism. Well done
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 11/16/2021 5:21:00 AM
Thank you very much. I worked very hard on this one.

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