Vampire Sonnets Ii the First Kill

With vampire eyes I slowly gazed at him,
ready to go and stalk my first victim;
Scanning the crowd in close proximity, 
wandering through the streets of the city;

Speaking with a voice of hypnotic rhymes,
whispers with the power to slow down time;
Swept up in the passion of a slow kiss, 
unaware that lust was so dangerous;

Nibbled on his neck scraping to a bite 
a loud moan, but absolutely no fight; 
He fell for the magic of every quip,
went limp in my arms took the final sip;

Power to seduce? Unbelievable; 
Partner left so proud, I made my first kill.
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November 15, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Your Sonnet is exquisitely crafted with superb metaphors and stunning symbolism. Well done
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November 16, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Thank you very much. I worked very hard on this one.
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