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Vampire Pleiades

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Villains of darkest night, Vicious canines to bite, Veinous blood target site, Veiled they wander in white, Voice eery to give fright, Vultures watch from their heights, Venture not within sight!! Written 7/ May/ 2021 4th placement 7 lines 6 syllables each line with monorhyme Kim Merryman sponsored V Pleiades poetry contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2021 4:35:00 PM

you did great with rhyming it. surprised it did not place higher. Congrats, Krish

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/9/2021 8:10:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Ranking is gut feeling of the sponsor, so we take it as it comes!! Thanks for your kindness!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/9/2021 7:52:00 AM

Ohh... So scary Krishji... my son would love this... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/9/2021 8:11:00 PM

Thanks Ani! Congrats to you too on your top win!!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/8/2021 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Krish. Interesting the fact that we both chose to write about a vampire, and yet all our V words are different! ~ Regards // paul

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/8/2021 2:20:00 PM

Yes, Paul. Same images different words. Mine was the last entry! Thanks for your kind remarks!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2021 12:06:00 PM

- A scary night, Krish - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/8/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise! Honoured to be on the list of winners!

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/8/2021 8:16:00 AM

Wow, Krish, this is a really cool vampire Pleiades... and rhyming, no less! Congrats on your win.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/8/2021 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Carol!! Pleased you like it!

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/8/2021 7:49:00 AM

I've always been fascinated by vampires. Congrats on your win with this descriptive write, Krish! Blessings, Kim

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/8/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Kim. Much apprecited.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/7/2021 11:08:00 PM

Great imagery on a dark note as I love them.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/7/2021 11:29:00 PM

Victor Thank you! Pleased you like it. Had half a mind to write about Queen Victoria but not much V to go with her!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/7/2021 3:15:00 PM

Ohhh.. this is really scary! "Venture not within sight!!" That's a good warning. BW ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/7/2021 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Mala! Happy to hear from you! Hope you are well!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2021 3:02:00 PM

'Venture not!' I am listening with all four ears! lol. Good one, Krish. G.L. in the contest. :) gw

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/7/2021 3:05:00 PM

Thanks Gershon! I had been to the Dracula castle in Transylvania!! a unique experience!!