Krish Radhakrishna Poet Pleiades

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Vampire Pleiades

Villains of darkest night,
Vicious canines to bite,
Veinous blood target site,
Veiled they wander in white,
Voice eery to give fright,
Vultures watch from their heights,
Venture not within sight!!

Written 7/ May/ 2021

4th placement
7 lines 6 syllables each line with monorhyme
Kim Merryman sponsored
V Pleiades poetry contest

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Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2021 at 4:35 PM you did great with rhyming it. surprised it did not place higher. Congrats, Krish Krish Radhakrishna May 9, 2021 at 8:10 PM Thanks Andrea. Ranking is gut feeling of the sponsor, so we take it as it comes!! Thanks for your kindness!

Anitha Jayasankar May 9, 2021 at 7:52 AM Ohh... So scary Krishji... my son would love this... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani Krish Radhakrishna May 9, 2021 at 8:11 PM Thanks Ani! Congrats to you too on your top win!!

Paul Callus May 8, 2021 at 1:50 PM Congratulations on your fine win, Krish. Interesting the fact that we both chose to write about a vampire, and yet all our V words are different! ~ Regards // paul Krish Radhakrishna May 8, 2021 at 2:20 PM Yes, Paul. Same images different words. Mine was the last entry! Thanks for your kind remarks!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2021 at 12:06 PM - A scary night, Krish - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna May 8, 2021 at 1:19 PM Thanks Anne-Lise! Honoured to be on the list of winners!

Kim Merryman May 8, 2021 at 7:49 AM I've always been fascinated by vampires. Congrats on your win with this descriptive write, Krish! Blessings, Kim Krish Radhakrishna May 8, 2021 at 8:54 AM Thanks Kim. Much apprecited.

Victor Buhagiar May 7, 2021 at 11:08 PM Great imagery on a dark note as I love them. Krish Radhakrishna May 7, 2021 at 11:29 PM Victor Thank you! Pleased you like it. Had half a mind to write about Queen Victoria but not much V to go with her!

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 7, 2021 at 3:15 PM Ohhh.. this is really scary! "Venture not within sight!!" That's a good warning. BW ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna May 7, 2021 at 3:22 PM Thanks Mala! Happy to hear from you! Hope you are well!

Gershon Wolf May 7, 2021 at 3:02 PM 'Venture not!' I am listening with all four ears! lol. Good one, Krish. G.L. in the contest. :) gw Krish Radhakrishna May 7, 2021 at 3:05 PM Thanks Gershon! I had been to the Dracula castle in Transylvania!! a unique experience!!