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Vampire Pleiades

Villains of darkest night,
Vicious canines to bite,
Veinous blood target site,
Veiled they wander in white,
Voice eery to give fright,
Vultures watch from their heights,
Venture not within sight!!

Written 7/ May/ 2021

4th placement
7 lines 6 syllables each line with monorhyme
Kim Merryman sponsored
V Pleiades poetry contest

Copyright © Krish Radhakrishna | Year Posted 2021

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/9/2021 4:35:00 PM you did great with rhyming it. surprised it did not place higher. Congrats, Krish Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/9/2021 8:10:00 PM Thanks Andrea. Ranking is gut feeling of the sponsor, so we take it as it comes!! Thanks for your kindness!

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 5/9/2021 7:52:00 AM Ohh... So scary Krishji... my son would love this... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/9/2021 8:11:00 PM Thanks Ani! Congrats to you too on your top win!!

Paul Callus Date: 5/8/2021 1:50:00 PM Congratulations on your fine win, Krish. Interesting the fact that we both chose to write about a vampire, and yet all our V words are different! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/8/2021 2:20:00 PM Yes, Paul. Same images different words. Mine was the last entry! Thanks for your kind remarks!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2021 12:06:00 PM - A scary night, Krish - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/8/2021 1:19:00 PM Thanks Anne-Lise! Honoured to be on the list of winners!

Kim Merryman Date: 5/8/2021 7:49:00 AM I've always been fascinated by vampires. Congrats on your win with this descriptive write, Krish! Blessings, Kim Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/8/2021 8:54:00 AM Thanks Kim. Much apprecited.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/7/2021 11:08:00 PM Great imagery on a dark note as I love them. Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/7/2021 11:29:00 PM Victor Thank you! Pleased you like it. Had half a mind to write about Queen Victoria but not much V to go with her!

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/7/2021 3:15:00 PM Ohhh.. this is really scary! "Venture not within sight!!" That's a good warning. BW ~ Mala Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/7/2021 3:22:00 PM Thanks Mala! Happy to hear from you! Hope you are well!

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/7/2021 3:02:00 PM 'Venture not!' I am listening with all four ears! lol. Good one, Krish. G.L. in the contest. :) gw Login to Reply Krish Radhakrishna Date: 5/7/2021 3:05:00 PM Thanks Gershon! I had been to the Dracula castle in Transylvania!! a unique experience!!