Red Fiery Poet Free verse

Vampire Love

His thirst increases with every drop of blood

the kiss is venomous

the  target he sets

infuriates  his own soul

victims  are  obsessed with his smile

like a dagger he enters the skin

sharp and dreadful

you will know his nefarious schemes

once you are in his satanic grip !

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Robin Davis September 30, 2013 at 8:47 PM This is creative and scary at the same time. You allow the reader to be drawn into this sensual and dark world. nice job

Amit Valmiki October 7, 2011 at 9:54 AM what a nice collaboration of words, for which a poet is meant for. really very nice and yaa, agree with you on this topic. my lover is what I feels her as satan. nice work Smriti ji. Amit Valmiki(India)

Elizabeth Wesley September 19, 2011 at 10:51 PM Oh those teeth that sink in! Hope he survives your clandestine visit.

Michael Wayne July 14, 2011 at 6:59 AM I prefer your more sensuous pieces dear woman. May you find true loves arms in the near future.

David Williams July 11, 2011 at 2:32 PM hi Smriti, very dark and deep, well done. thanks for your very kind comments on my poem, David

James Foulk July 11, 2011 at 12:59 PM such drama, kept one reading , so creative.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 11, 2011 at 9:41 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Smriti. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol