Vampire Heart

You steal my heart away.
In the stillness of the night.
You make my heart a plush.
And give me a rush.
You do this every night.
You do it so frequently.
You make me want to die.



My 9-year-old granddaughter dictated this to me this 12: 28 noon time, 
Londyn asks me to post it for her.  Feb 17, Wed. 2016  at 12: 28 noon.
She thought up the words as I was reading a book called Vampires, Wine, and Roses."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/29/2016 9:38:00 PM
Oh the sweet angels and Vampires of our days .They come in all sizes. This young one defiantly is one of the Sweet Angels. Bravo!
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Date: 4/22/2016 3:27:00 PM
Wow lots of talent well done young lady a true poet Great writes to come I'm sure .
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Date: 3/8/2016 5:21:00 AM
This is beautiful! Coming from a 9 year old I would say we have a poetess in the making! I am going to give her full marks:) And to Londyn...keep it up:) // paul
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:29:00 AM
A nine year old...hmmm. Seems like she has made a piece about some kind of addiction. So, she is very wise. It must be something she gets from you!! Poetry is indeed a marvelous thing. To Londyn, your message for us is a win. You've left me with a grin.
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Date: 3/5/2016 6:35:00 PM
wow, great job for a youngster. I bet she enjoys seeing the comments on her budding talent.
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Date: 3/4/2016 5:34:00 PM
Nurture that talent Debbie - this is a fabulous poem for one so young:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2016 6:21:00 AM
Very well done, Debbie: It must run in the family.
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:15:00 AM
How lovely that is comming from a 9 year old, takes after her Nan , better than what I can do, nurture her Debbie she may because an accomplished writer some day, take care.........Vera
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Date: 2/22/2016 3:17:00 PM
you've got a great grand daughter there Debbie...help her grow into a very creative one...my well wishes...and do tell her on my behalf...I acknowledge her greatness!
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