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Vampire Heart

You steal my heart away. In the stillness of the night. You make my heart a plush. And give me a rush. You do this every night. You do it so frequently. You make me want to die. My 9-year-old granddaughter dictated this to me this 12: 28 noon time, Londyn asks me to post it for her. Feb 17, Wed. 2016 at 12: 28 noon. She thought up the words as I was reading a book called Vampires, Wine, and Roses."

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Michael Ainsley

Date: 7/29/2016 9:38:00 PM

Oh the sweet angels and Vampires of our days .They come in all sizes. This young one defiantly is one of the Sweet Angels. Bravo!

Duncan Chappell

Date: 4/22/2016 3:27:00 PM

Wow lots of talent well done young lady a true poet Great writes to come I'm sure .

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2016 5:21:00 AM

This is beautiful! Coming from a 9 year old I would say we have a poetess in the making! I am going to give her full marks:) And to Londyn...keep it up:) // paul

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/6/2016 10:29:00 AM

A nine year old...hmmm. Seems like she has made a piece about some kind of addiction. So, she is very wise. It must be something she gets from you!! Poetry is indeed a marvelous thing. To Londyn, your message for us is a win. You've left me with a grin.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2016 6:35:00 PM

wow, great job for a youngster. I bet she enjoys seeing the comments on her budding talent.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2016 5:34:00 PM

Nurture that talent Debbie - this is a fabulous poem for one so young:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/24/2016 6:21:00 AM

Very well done, Debbie: It must run in the family.

Vera Duggan

Date: 2/24/2016 12:15:00 AM

How lovely that is comming from a 9 year old, takes after her Nan , better than what I can do, nurture her Debbie she may because an accomplished writer some day, take care.........Vera

White Sage

Date: 2/22/2016 3:17:00 PM

you've got a great grand daughter there Debbie...help her grow into a very creative one...my well wishes...and do tell her on my behalf...I acknowledge her greatness!