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Vampire

Vampire I dared to love a vampire, oh fascinating maid, all legs with lustrous red hair smooth as silk, pleasing to the eye. Dwells dost she in some delicious coffin, of cherry-wood ebony. Have ye ever seen the beautiful dead? faces so young, full of dread Cause somewhere lurks the beast madness!! beware old men on bicycles and train crossings in hell, If lost, stay lost. One glorious Tuscan evening I cared to pass about, Oh! ancient villa, In the air this night, lovely, lovely bats with dirty little whiskers, like dirty little rats. Oh! misery. Now in Hell they celebrate Christmas, Scoffing cake and such the like, Now hear a secret, us dead don’t cry. Please oh! Please remember me, You see it hurts so, If you don’t.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/15/2012 9:43:00 PM
Carrington, wow... i like the image of the delicious coffin,,, epic imagery. oh! misery... whiskers the dirty little rats... now that's a dance I'm gonna bite into. love your fascinating poem...xox~pd
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Carrington Marshall
Date: 8/16/2012 2:22:00 AM
Thanks for your comments Poet Destroyer, I have just posted another ohe of my macbre poems on here its called Herods Debt, and you may enjoy reading it, be careful thou cause it can bite, LOL carrington ps! its in my book called DOOR o'tha DEAD

Book: Reflection on the Important Things