Vampire

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Voracious blood suckers Vespertilian beasts Vermilion eyes, white fangs Velvet cloak, black en-wrapped Vigilant for dawn's break Voraciously gorging Vivid red neck vein blood

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2023 10:42:00 AM

Very vivid and very creative wordplay. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

John Anderson
Date: 9/28/2023 10:43:00 AM

Thank you for your kind response. Cheers John

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/27/2023 3:39:00 PM

Such a vivid description, John. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

John Anderson
Date: 9/27/2023 8:46:00 PM

Thanks, cheers

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 6:06:00 AM

Congrats on your win John, Very nicely penned

John Anderson
Date: 9/27/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thanks so much. Cheers and Best Wishes to You.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2023 3:50:00 PM

excellent ink John we chose the same theme:-) hugs Jan xx

John Anderson
Date: 9/21/2023 4:10:00 PM

Yeah, thanks, Best Wishes