Valleys

                          Visions of calm landscapes
                            venerate tranquil scenes
                         vast plains of bending wheat
                              various homesteads lie
                               vistas overlook sights
                            voices heard in whispers 
                           veiled secrets in the winds.













A Pleiades Poem
10/2/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buehler Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 9:40 PM
This is beautiful, Laura. I enjoyed the delightful images. :)
Leiser Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 10:30 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! So happy you stopped by to comment. Glad you liked this one! :)
Callus Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 11:21 AM
You have tackled this Pleiades form extremely well, Laura. It projects both imagery and mystery. ~ Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:19 PM
Thank you, Paul! I really appreciate your kind comments and encouragement! I’ve been in a major writer’s block, so am trying the Pleaides form to try to “kick start” things!
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