Valley of Trees Caleb's In the Woods Contest

I looked everywhere to find some woods
I asked a friend to show me if he could

There once was a time there were trees all around
Although we kept looking there were none to be found

I've seen pictures of forests that used to cover the earth
Sadly they all vanished long before the day of my birth

Way back in the past I'm told the world was pristine
Trees, forests and animals, lakes that would gleam

They just watched, the warnings they didn't heed
The planet decimated, people just watched it bleed

So off to a museum called the valley of the trees
Artificial replicas, real ones destroyed by our disease

I'm forced to travel to the woods in my mind
Although I've searched long and hard, only pretend can I find
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 1, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Congratulations.... awesome win....SKAT
Adams Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 10:53 AM
so true in many places, sadly enough...I am lucky, I live in a development surrounded by maple trees, and behind the house is a wooded area, with a small stream, horses out to pasture behind that... enjoyed this one Richard...congrats :)
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September 30, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Richard. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 12:06 PM
nice win...Linda
Sirak Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Loved this. While reading I was reminded of one of my poems about looking for rainbows which have become myths. I think I will post it.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 8:18 AM
I love your melting Rainbow poem.
Seal Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 6:57 PM
Reminds me of 'Big Yellow Taxi', by another talented Canadian. Grim but perfect picture of what the future may hold. I like your slant in this contest Rick, well done. Take care, Richard
Jones Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 6:49 PM
So close to the truth Richard...really enjoyed your approach to this contest..good luck...:-)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Thanks Donna
Manassian Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 6:14 PM
Richard....this is the sad reality of our world...You brought it to light with this piece.... Good luck!! Soup Mail...some observations about this piece...
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Thanks for the soup mail.
Macfarlane Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Clever and awesome write! Hope it never comes to this. Happy belated birthday! Hope all you wished for came true. XO
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Thanks for the Birthday wish!
Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 11:10 AM
a ruse awakening pressing the dim of reality in a most appealing and poetic way, rich!... on another point, here's a toast to a wonderful Virgo.. have a blast, birthday boy!!...:) huggs!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Thanks nette, also appreciate the birthday wish and hug.:0)
Tacito Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Fierce & full of finely harsh truth! Humanity is our own worst enemy, unless we wake up. Fantastic job!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 3:09 PM
Thanks Drake. Yes I had a very good day.
Tacito Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Oh and HAPPY FRIGGIN BELATED BIRTHDAY! =D I can't believe I missed the memo yesterday on Becca's poem. I hope you had a blast sir!
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