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Valley of Tears

Cry as if there is no tomorrow I'll serve as the valley of your tears I'll always be here to catch all your sorrows I'll always be here to protect you from your fears. I'll serve as the valley of your tears Collect them from your beautiful eyes I'll always be here to protect you from your fears You'll never be again as blue as the skies Collect them from your beautiful eyes Let them pour, I'll catch them all You'll never be again as blue as the skies I'll catch the tears whenever they fall Let them pour, I'll catch them all I'll always be here to catch all your sorrows I'll catch the tears whenever they fall Cry as if there is no tomorrow

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Date: 4/13/2016 8:34:00 AM
A deep, emotional verse.... Congrats, Hans, for your WIN in the contest, with this wonderful work!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:59:00 AM
Hi Hansteven, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A excellent work my friend. Such a gentle Pantoum. It touches deeply. Has to be a seven a for me....Mike.
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:55:00 PM
Hansteven, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/5/2016 4:21:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/5/2016 4:55:00 AM
Great work Hansteven.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats! Thanks for your kind visits to my page..
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations Hans, great win...
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Date: 4/4/2016 7:36:00 PM
Hansteven, great Pantoum poem congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:54:00 PM
Beautiful, heartfelt poem, Hansteven. Congratulations on your placement! Sandra
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:51:00 PM
Hans, what a beautiful poem...congrats on your top placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 4/4/2016 4:33:00 PM
This is so touching Hansteven many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 1/9/2016 6:31:00 AM
I really like this! Sincere, very touching.
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Date: 1/2/2016 1:46:00 PM
I love Pantoums and this is beautiful. Welcome to poetry soup~ Caryl
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Date: 12/14/2015 8:04:00 AM
Good flow to this Pantoum..They are not as easy to write as it might seem..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2015 2:55:00 AM
So beautiful! Can feel the compassion in your words.
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Date: 12/12/2015 6:22:00 AM
Thank you Susan

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