Valley of Remembrance

Rooted in this valley
We watched the sun fold her 
petals
one by one into the navel of 
the sky
Betraying us into an ambush of 
shadows
Frightened we tremble as the 
wind weeps through the trees 
like a blind man's wife looked 
outside on a rainy night
Time wound our heels
Time heals our wound
If we shall ever meet again,may 
it not be on a moonless 
night,that we not peer like 
strangers into each other's face
May we meet instead under the 
old crescent and transparent 
smiles of the moon
That we may bend slightly 
amidst silent smiles and 
knowing nods in recognition of 
the wrinkles of suffering and 
dimples of smiles on each 
other's face..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 1, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Chisom, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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September 25, 2013 at 6:31 AM
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February 24, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thanks Anne
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September 25, 2013 at 6:30 AM
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