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Valley of Remembrance

Rooted in this valley We watched the sun fold her petals one by one into the navel of the sky Betraying us into an ambush of shadows Frightened we tremble as the wind weeps through the trees like a blind man's wife looked outside on a rainy night Time wound our heels Time heals our wound If we shall ever meet again,may it not be on a moonless night,that we not peer like strangers into each other's face May we meet instead under the old crescent and transparent smiles of the moon That we may bend slightly amidst silent smiles and knowing nods in recognition of the wrinkles of suffering and dimples of smiles on each other's face..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/1/2013 7:07:00 PM
Chisom, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/25/2013 6:31:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Gabriel ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Anne
Date: 9/25/2013 6:30:00 AM
Gabriel-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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