Valley of Love

Lost in love’s valley
Like fragrance of a rose 
In the morning breeze
I’ll not be I then
I’ll then be you.

(Inspired by the seventeenth century mystic poet
 of Sindh Shah Abdul Latif Bhitai’s poetry)

Sintra, Portugal 25/01/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 8:13 PM
oh how I love this tanka!! so unusual and pretty.
Andresen Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 2:41 PM
- A touching and beautiful Tanka poem - A place where roses grows - Nice to see you, Mohammad :) - Enjoy the rest of Easter :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Yamin Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Thanks for visiting my Tanka Anne and for your appreciation
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..I am not familiar with the poet mentioned..Is his work translated into English?..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment..Sara
Yamin Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Thanks for visiting my Tanka. Shah Abdul Latif Bhitai was a renowned Sufi, musician and poet in the seventeenth century of Sindh, India now a province of Pakistan. Much research work has been done on his life and poetry by the authors in Pakistan and India and in several major languages of the world including English. Pakistan Academy of letters has entrusted me the job of translating in English the book titled Shah Abdul Latif Bhitai -Life and Thoughts. The book is almost finished. I'll let you know when it is published. Love. -Mohammad
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