Valiantly Their Souls March On Home

Fight to the death 
From sword to fiery ash, from honor to tale engraved stone 
That they did until their final breath 
Oh, the places that they'd roam 
From soul to eternity in the abyss, from the crack of every bone to the life they had always known 
And the tasks they'd undergo 
To finally find that place called home 
Listen, to the tale that their loss would bestow 
From glory to the shadows, from the bash of every shield 
To the meaning that they yield 
From victory to loss, from their deaths to the banner waving in the breeze 
To their burning corpses consecrating this bloody battlefield 
Still to this day if you listen to the wind you can hear them cry in agony as the drum roll beats echoing beyond the trees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/18/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, and I must say that he is a brave man. I slightly envy that, for I, courage is not something I have much of. So thank you for sharing that, and I will continue to write, so anytime you can critique or even just leave a comment it would be greatly appreciated.
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:49:00 AM
Touching piece. My son just left last week to join the army infintry.
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