Valerie (Part 2)

I saw her to her dorm room, and asked if I might have the pleasure of
her company later for dinner. She coyly accepted my invitation.. One hour
later I picked her up. She looked enchanting... We drove out to Woodstock,
home to Blenheim Palace, the ancestral seat of the Churchill family. 
There we enjoyed a casual meal, laughing again over the misadventures
of the afternoon. As the sun was beginning to set I led her outside the
restaurant and down the lane to the corner. I told her to keep her eyes closed.
When she opened them she saw a vista she would never forget;
the palace, high on a hill, a fairy-tale vision, with pastureland sloping down
to a lake in the foreground dotted with swans, all bathed in the glow of
the setting sun. She stood there, speechless for a moment. I squeezed
her hand and we gazed into each other's eyes. Not a word was spoken.
We were both grateful for the day we had spent together. 
It was just the two of us. Time had stopped, and only that moment mattered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 24, 2008 at 5:03 AM
This is the perfect ending to a lovely story. The imagery is beauitful. Reading it leaves you with a happy and contented feeling. Excellent write, Keith. Thank you for sharing this beautiful moment. Love, Robin
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December 23, 2008 at 5:49 PM
Isn't it amazing how a day like this can stick in your memory, each detail so vivid, for the rest of your life? I think we sometimes don't recognize the happiest days while they are happening, until we reflect on them later. A lovely narration...both parts 1 and 2! Enjoyed sharing that day with you! ~ Carrie
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