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Valentino

I found you in my desperate time of need when I had nothing I ever need you looked at me with those baby greens saying hold me you’re the one I truly need. You look at me and I see the happiness slowly come flooding back to me. As I sit here holding you I hear your plea love me, hold me take care of me. As I lay here thinking how could this be I have the perfect one that will never ever leave me. you play with my hair that’s getting a tangled mess you tickle me sending chills down my spine I laugh its coming back the one I thought I lost an seem to lack you’ll be the one to bring it back .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/8/2012 8:21:00 AM
This is a very strong piece. I quite enjoyed the ending. Just be sure to work on better punctuation placement. Otherwise, again, very strong piece & end.
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