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Valentine's Season Again

I was laughing so casually … Everything was perfect for such a long time. Then I caught a pair of eyes searching in the crowd. It amused me…his eyes rested upon somebody. He was cracking a joke about some fair lady. He looked flirtatious but eyes carefully hiding intentions. It was a century's game starting, one of those I know... It’s everyone’s age and moment.. The search for something more.. Something out of routines.. Fluttering of heart, one side or both? Don’t know yet Excitement..... my writer's curiosity is awakened I like those eyes.. It just reminded me of someone Far behind and close to me A spasm of sweet pain washed over me. It is called... times gone....something lost... He's linked to my very nature of stars and traits. I couldn’t understand this unsettling feelings I had to observe and track it carefully. It was first sight love in the air, Lovers taking birth. I was connecting to it.... like getting closer and unravelling a mystery Of mixed feelings of dreams and rationality…. Oh! A dose of gym would clear my mind!! Isn’t it part of the writer's journey A new love story to craft upon.

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Date: 3/7/2020 4:36:00 AM
Wow a sensational poem romantic following eyes, reminding of love all written in a superb way. Kudos for this Valentine's offering! I just saw your cmnt on mine. Tx!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 3/21/2020 10:34:00 AM
Hi I enjoyed your poems...tho I'm a bit rare on this site now. Thanks for appreciating. Love the words. Keep up the good work!!!:) Sunita UPD
Date: 2/15/2020 3:42:00 AM
The heart never forgets love even if is not present dearest, Sunita! A fine profound writing that shows knowledge of heart's aches!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/15/2020 4:00:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for the read and very nice comment. It's true..love in all its form keep us alive. And connecting to a noble soul is instant. Hugs Sunita UPD
Date: 2/14/2020 2:16:00 PM
You saw a live love thirst...eyes on the prize...gym might not clear mind but keep you fit
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/15/2020 2:22:00 AM
Ya...writers are sensitive creatures as any artist, they capture any moment with heart and mind. We connect to them so differently. Thanks for reading. :) Sunita UPD

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