Valentine's Day Coming

VALENTINE’S DAY COMING

had it i to give
to serve my heart on a tray
gladly would i do
but you’ve stolen it away
know, dear thief, i still love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Maverick Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 10:41 PM
You have put a lot into this offering I see Daver; but then i guess you know she is worth it.." Hope the day and many more to come are great in every way...!!!
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 7:59 AM
love this sweet write, Daver
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 10:58 PM
this is what I call utterly "charming" now go give her your heart (but not on a platter!!)
Mac Donald Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Oh, I hope she reads this, Daver!!! This one is a beauty, but can't compare to your own wonderful "thief".:) I don't think you'd need to "serve your heart on a tray", she would feel this at all times. Happy Valentine's Day to you both! Love, Mikki
Williams Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Daver this is great....David
Carrillo Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 8:33 PM
That must have been some thief. I hope you have a happy valentine's day. Thanks for reading my poem A Woman. Many blessings. Lucilla
Harrington Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 1:33 PM
Love it! Wonderfully expressed! :) Tanya
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Sweet thief,Daver - oxox // Anne-Lise:)
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