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Valentines Day

VALENTINES DAY A rose proposed in his hand so excited for school tomorrow tomorrow came the same as before with alarms and classwork and annoying looks the alarm rang twice and he knew it was strange in his hand a pale rose with thorns the rose proposed upon its knees before it died in his hand 2/16/2018

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/18/2018 1:03:00 PM

Beautiful...sad...a twist of fate that changed the lives of many. How will broken hearts heal!? ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2018 4:48:00 PM

Very sad :(

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2018 8:19:00 PM

Well done, Kim. As Victor says, a very metaphorical poem and giving your important message poetically to the world.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2018 9:08:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. A sad thing to write about.

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/16/2018 10:45:00 PM

Dear Kim, A very sad occasion, so hard to write about, and you did it well. Me, another night of tears. It really is time the USA CHANGED THEIR FIREARM LAW/S!!! My heartfelt condolences to all who lost a child. Mick

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2018 3:29:00 AM

Thanks, Mick! So true...so hard to write about.