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Valentine's

Valentine's  Very Altered  Life Entrenched  Near Time's  Infinite  Nothingness  Evolving  Spectacularly  In one day I could love for a year's worth of time or I could grow with you gradually in God's time He counts our hairs as the wind blows He hears the valves of our hearts pumping pushing cells to and fro I wanna slow life down, enter the matrix dodge bullets and see humming birds' wings frame by frame, in short, I'd like to take a minute to savour these seconds, and continue to evolving spectacularly in altered living entrenched near time's vacancy and unscramble the day with you.

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Date: 2/14/2015 2:04:00 PM
Love the acrostic and especially the imagery in the final verse - the matrix reference was brilliantly done:-) Hugs Jan 7 xx
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