Valentineless Haiku

Sweethearts swarm like bees Stinging my loveless core sCUPIDity!
Glenn L. Sentes For Olajide Adelana's STORY OF VALENTINE Contest 02-02-12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Edwards Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Two thumbs up from me..the last line is the clincher Glenn xx
Sweetheart Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 9:31 PM
emphatic lines of valentineless Glenn.. clever entry.. good luck luv.. that last line should get u a winning nod luv..
K. Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Very witty write, Glenn! Liked the wordplay as well! ;)
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February 2, 2012 at 7:34 AM
A bit of clever wordplay...enjoyed "s-CUPIDity"...
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February 2, 2012 at 5:53 AM
good one Glenn. Elizabeth
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