Valentine Senryu

dying for your love

am I – your parched desert rose. . .

darling, quench my thirst


Feb. 5, 2019 for  Tania Kitchin's Valentine Senryu Poetry Contest
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Horne Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:16 PM
very romantic indeed
Y. Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm soooo happy to see you on the winning list my friend. Congratulations:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 5:23 PM
ohh err Andrea !!! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Hinshaw Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Congrats, Andrea, for this splendid entry and your win. Honored to share 3d place with you - Bob
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 1:24 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. I can spend time tomorrow on poetry. Lots of news to share. I will email you. xxoo
Rose  Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 8:51 PM
sweet one Andrea, congrats
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Great Senryu, Andrea, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*
Proxenos Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Again Andrea, sweet loving music to one ears! Again best for a win! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:56 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely Valentine Senryu, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Awesome romantic senryu, congratulations on your winning placement!
May Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Great senryu Andrea..Congrats on your win..
Kannan Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 7:39 AM
That's so cute, Andrea
Cunningham Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:26 AM
Very nice romantic senyru Andrea
Brown  Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:14 AM
Only words of love make the world a better place. Especially if the one close to you was a perfect choice.
Anish Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 7:02 PM
What a nice image for the holiday! I must figure out who to send a Valentine to - if anyone. Today I walked over to Poets House to donate three chapbooks. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Callus Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:11 PM
An excellent Valentine Senryu with the right amount of romantic flavour, Andrea. Even if not addressed to me, I'll still give you top place in the contest :) Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Ah, so poetic and poignant, Andrea!
Bavington  Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Short sweet right to the point. I wish you luck in the contest.
Y. Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:01 AM
WoW! Andrea, You have penned a beautiful and romantic write for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck for the contest:-) Alexis
Lawless Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:37 AM
OH YEAH.......
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Oh wonderful! Quenching! xomo
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:08 AM
Charming..beautiful..like love.
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