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Valentine Haiku

Honeysuckle vines
Golden nectar from blooms tip
Honey for your lips

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Andrea Dietrich

January 16, 2012 at 5:18 PM

I like the way the first and last lines compliment each other. Congrats on your win (belatedly)

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 16, 2012 at 2:01 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Debra. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath

January 14, 2012 at 12:07 AM

Congratulation my friend on your win in the contest for this lovely haiku, enjoyed, bl

Audrey Haick

January 13, 2012 at 2:05 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Debra! Love, annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 13, 2012 at 9:38 AM

CONGRATS DEBRA ON A FANTASTIC WIN..

Debra Squyres

January 13, 2012 at 6:16 AM

Thank you all for your lovely comments....and thanks to DP for my honorable mention in her contest. I rather like this form of poetry...nature compacted into a few words.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 13, 2012 at 2:19 AM

Congratulations on your win Debra x

Poet Destroyer A

January 12, 2012 at 9:37 PM

Debra... Congratulation, ;-) in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.

Matthew Anish

January 10, 2012 at 5:06 PM

Sweet poem! I enjoyed it! Are you using a little personification here? Peace & Love Mathew Anish

Kash Poet

January 10, 2012 at 11:10 AM

An excellent haiku on Valentine Deb.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

Nette Onclaud

January 10, 2012 at 7:53 AM

i don't know what makes me want to dance while reading this.. and breathtaking too, debby... i like the honey dione two ways!... :) huggs!

Black Eyed Susan

January 10, 2012 at 7:33 AM

I like that this poem has 2 meanings :) and i like both of them, even if that was not your intention. great imagery. good luck in the contest!

Cory Long

January 10, 2012 at 7:12 AM

this was very good.. thank you for all your comments. I have added you as a favorite poet :) hope you had a wonderful holiday. Cory

David Williams

January 10, 2012 at 6:37 AM

knockout Debs, Valentine's day is rushing fast, enjoyed..David

Brenda Victoria Northeast

January 9, 2012 at 5:50 PM

That is so sweet- no pun intended lol : ) I loved honeysuckle when I was a kid I used to suck them.

Robert A. Dufresne

January 9, 2012 at 4:21 PM

hey this is a really cool Haiku, Debra! Ilike it lots. very well done and imaginative. f this is for contest, it will be right up there.

Andrew Crisci

January 9, 2012 at 12:54 PM

Happy New Year to you , Debra! I love your your Valentine Haiku...it shows imagination and passion. If this is for the contest...I wish you good luck. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Andrew.

Sara Kendrick

January 9, 2012 at 12:47 PM

Yes, it is fun enjoying that treat..I bet slugs like that also..Ha!Ha!..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debra Squyres

January 9, 2012 at 4:00 PM

Ha !! Them there slugs better stay away from my honeysuckle vines lol Keep them over there on your page lol

Suzanne C. Goudreau

January 9, 2012 at 10:07 AM

Wow, I could just about taste that honey. Lovely imagery and perfectly delivered. Million thx for sharing!

Lord R. E. Taylor

January 9, 2012 at 12:28 AM

It is a beautiful piece and a beautiful. Could you send some of the nectar my way???

Milton Toran

January 8, 2012 at 8:45 PM

A nicely written haiku. Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Oh that's right! Valentine's Day ain't too far off! Time's really flying!...Milt

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 8, 2012 at 7:23 PM

sounds perfectly sweet Debra .. good luck .. saw your blog comment for Tracie.. am waiting to hear from my friend if he wants to enter with me ..if not will be happy to partner with u luv .. should know soon ..

Debra Squyres

January 8, 2012 at 8:22 PM

Just let me know via soup mail...

Lizanne Scholtz

January 8, 2012 at 5:09 PM

lovely Haiku Debra, best wishes Elizabeth

Robert Pettit

January 8, 2012 at 4:59 PM

As cold as it has been around here lately, I can use all the reminders of summer I can get. This haiku reminds me of a typical day in June.

Debra Squyres

January 8, 2012 at 8:25 PM

I have so many fond memories of spending warm days stripping the blooms form the honeysuckle vines...a childhood memory.

John Aaron Green

January 8, 2012 at 3:56 PM

great to see you again,,are you still on the other sight,,this is wonderful,,and thanks so much for your kind comments...

Debra Squyres

January 8, 2012 at 4:49 PM

This is the only website I'm posting my scribbles on now. I do share some on a facebook page with other poets also from time to time. Glad to see you are doing well here with your uplifting poetry !!

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